Room 1 writers

We write about many different things in Rm 1.
The following shows our gorgeous writing from last week.

Descriptive Writing:

I like cherries because they are juicy and red.

I have a cherry tree at my house.

By Nessie

I like grapes because they are red and green.

They are juicy.

By Samantha.

I like watermelon because it is juicy and red.

Sometimes the juice runs down my chin.

By Eden.

I like pineapple because it is juicy and sweet.

I eat pineapple in summer.

By Elizabeth.

Writing about ourselves/experiences:

I have new neighbours.

The lounge door is broken.

There are 100 windows at my house.

I live by the Indian people.

By Al Amin.

I am playing with my friend.

By Gloria.

I am playing outside.

By Ky.

My Dad is driving the car.

By Simon.

Me and my family are taking a picture.

By Dontae.

My team won.

We got three tries.

By Hawaiki.

I am wearing a pretty dress and sparkly shoes.

By Amelia.

I went to Dontae’s house.

We played lego.

We made race cars.

By Lucas.

I was listening to Rhonda and I got a positive card.

By Hannah.

I am at my house.

I am playing hide and seek with my sister.

By Ethan.

Writing about a shared experience:

I like popping the bubbles.

I pop them with my finger.

By Brodie.

I like the bubbles popping.

They feel wet.

By Isaiah.

Imaginative writing:

I am riding a train!

It is going to North America.

By Ryan.